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Haiku lets me stop, if only for a few moments during my day, and reminds me to be present, to let myself feel. It reminds me to experience things fully instead of passively letting them wash over me. It calms and soothes me, like a brief moment of meditation that's not forced or contrived.




Pointing at the moon
Reminded of simple things
Moments matter most

        B.Y. Penman

 


rouged lips
forgotten---
clear spring water

Chiyo-ni

The Haiku Moment 

"In the "Haiku Moment" we see into the nature of things. We approach what has been called the Inner Life of the World of Things. It is not the self that sees but the things which are seen. The moment is possible because phenomenon and self are not in competition."

- George Marsh, "In The Moonlight a Worm ... silently drills through a chestnut" URL: http://www.haiku.insouthsea.co.uk/index.htm

Traditional Haiku Defined 

Haiku is a very short poetic form of Japanese origin that consists of three lines usually containing 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively. A haiku usually contains a kigo-- a word that evokes the season.

Key Elements of a Traditional Haiku 

  • Avoidance of rhyming or metaphor.
  • Descriptiveness-- Show don't tell.
  • When read aloud, it can be completed in one breath.
  • A cutting word-- A grammatical break that marks a transition or "thought pause" between separate parts of the poem.

 

First snow
falling
on the half-finished bridge.

Matsuo Basho
Translated by Robert Hass

Books of Traditional Haiku 

Basho: The Complete Haiku

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1020 Haiku in Translation: The Heart of Basho, Buson and Issa

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Autumn Wind Haiku: Selected Poems by Kobayashi Issa

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Books of Contemporary Haiku 

Hipster Haiku

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The Top Five Reasons Haiku Is The Best 

  1. A well-written haiku is a poignant portrayal of a moment in time captured with words.
  2. You can write haiku here, there and anywhere at any time.
  3. You can share haiku with other haijin (haiku poets) online.
  4. Jack Kerouac wrote haiku.
  5. A haiku is short and to the point. You can write it on a napkin, sticky note, coaster, matchbook cover, or any place else you fancy.

 


evening cherry blossoms--
the devil is moved
to tears

Kobayashi Issa

Kerouac's Haiku 

Jack Kerouac- American Haiku

Jack Kerouac reading " American Haiku " a number of original Haiku read to some jazz riffs- From my blog Gord's Poetry Factory at http://gordspoetryfactory.blogspot.com/ & my website gordscafe at http://gordscafe.tripod.com/

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Learn How To Write a Haiku 


How to Write a Haiku Poem
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A haiku is an unrhyming verse form, conveying a complete image or feeling in three lines of syllables, and are usually about nature or natural things. Here's how to create a descriptive, engaging haiku.
Steps
  1. Understand the traditional haiku format. Haiku in Japanese (an unstressed language) are written consecutively, with 17 syllables -- the first line contains five syllables, the second has seven, and the last has five. In English (a stressed language), the sentiment can be expressed with a short line, a long line, and another short -- line. However, some recent English haiku writers have written two-line haiku.
  2. Choose a general topic. Haiku usually focus on imagery from nature. Haiku do not tell linear stories and typically do not directly convey human experiences; they convey a deeply felt moment -- usually a scene from nature -- which is then simply expressed, without embellishment, that reflects a deeper human experience, such as simplicity or loneliness.
  3. Choose a season. Since virtually all haiku focus on nature, the season is important for coming up with the imagery. With so few words in the poem, simple phrases like "cherry blossoms" or "falling leaves" can create lush scenes, while reflecting the tone of the verse. In Japanese, the "kigo" or season word was generally understood; "autumn breeze" might be known to express loneliness and the coming of the dark winter season.
    • Winter usually connotes burden, cold, sadness, hunger, tranquility or peace. Winter can be invoked with words like "snow," "ice," "dead tree," "leafless," etc.
    • Summer conjures feelings of warmth, vibrancy, love, anger, temptation and many others. General summer phrases include allusions to the sky, beaches, heat, lust and any form of romance.
    • Autumn encompasses a very wide range of ideas: decay, belief in the supernatural, jealousy, saying good-bye, loss, regret and mystery to name a few. Falling leaves, shadows and autumn colors are the most common implementations.
    • Spring, like summer, can incorporate love, but it is usually more a sense of infatuation than lust. Also common are themes such as innocence, youth, passion and fickleness. Anything with blossoms, new plants, silk, warm rains can imply spring. For more information on seasons, go to the link listed below.Seasons don't have to be the ones listed. Holidays can be seasons of their own. There's a big difference between winter and Christmas, after all.

  4. Add a contrast. Reading most haiku, you'll notice they either present one idea for the first two lines and then switch quite abruptly to something else or do the same with the first line and last two, although this is not as common. Contrasts can be the hardest part. The haiku poet wants a perfect catalyst to spark the right emotional note. It doesn't have to be extremely severe; it can be anything from one color to another. In English, the contrast is often emphasized by punctuation between the two lines, although this is not necessary.


Tips
  • To get inspiration and begin to understand the subtlety of emotion within images from nature, read the ancient works of famous haiku poets. When reading translations of Issa or Basho, you might find the translator chose to preserve the meaning, but not the meter. Much of Issa's work is in the form abstract//abstract//concrete for the three lines, although in the original Japanese this was not so.
  • Write what you see, not what you feel. Haiku are ultimately about abstracts and emotions expressed through concrete images. When reading haiku, don't read as other poems. Haiku are written to capture a feeling and image. Keep an open mind when reading haiku and try to feel what the writer was trying to get across. The more you read haiku, the easier they are to understand.
  • Some are of the opinion that in English, Haiku should be limited to a 3/5/3 format to preserve the broken nature. Japanese words tend to be longer than English words, which is why translated Haiku tends to sound less complete than 5/7/5 poems written originally in English. You might try the shorter format to see how you like it.
  • Remember written Japanese is a visual language; it uses ideograms to represent ideas visually rather than characters to represent ideas audibly. In different combinations, Japanese characters (mostly based on Chinese characters) are pronounced differently, e.g., the character "sora" (empty of vanity) can be pronounced "kara" if combined with other characters to form a more complex idea. Thus haiku is really a Japanese-specific form of poetry. Simply copying the syllable pattern in a sound-based language like English is an interesting adaptation, but not haiku in the original sense. It may be better to consider such poems "haiku-inspired".
  • There are some who say that haiku can just be a short fragment (no more than three words) followed by a phrase.
  • early evening
  • small flat stones
  • line the shore.
  • The haiku doesn't have to be serious, it can be funny, although traditionalists might call it a 'senryu' rather than a 'haiku.' For example: 'I like Cottage Cheese, Cottage Cheese is my favorite, Yummy Cottage Cheese'.
  • There are haiku with humour [1], and there are also humourous haikulike poems called senyru [2]



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Books About Writing Haiku 

The Haiku Handbook: How to Write, Share, and Teach Haiku

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More Places To Learn About Haiku 

Japanese Traditional Haiku School Lesson 3
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James W. Hackett - Reflections & Suggestions
In the 1950s and 60s it hardly seemed possible that haiku poetry would enjoy its current worldwide popularity. Those of us who pioneered the writing of haiku poetry in English were dedicated to acquiring knowledge of the genre, honing our skills, and developing useful and enlightening guidelines for ourselves and others. In the decades since then, countless groups, editors, and individuals have expressed their ideas about what haiku in English should be.

Three Haiku Written On Viewing Kimonos 

three haiku written on viewing kimonos

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Photo Haiku 

Photo Haiku #1 by Steven Bedingfield

Photo Haiku #1

Twilight Motion by Shawn Econo

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Video Haiku 

Definition:

The capture/creation and sharing of the poetic image for the purpose of causing the viewer to perceive its environment with a heightened or more vivid perception.

Much like haijin (haiku poets), some video haiku artists adhere to a structured format which results in a 17 second movie comprised of three shots, the first shot lasts five seconds, the second shots lasts seven seconds, and the third shot lasts five seconds. This format mirrors the more traditional written haiku structure.

Video Haiku: 3 Breaths 

Video Haiku; 3 Breaths by Kristin Reeves

Video Haiku by Kristin Reeves (aka reeves*_*machine): three 30 sec pieces, the aesthetic of haiku; meaning is sensation through a breath; Synaesthesia in motion.

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Share Your Best Haiku Here! 

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Knotty Sapling

Knotty sapling spreads
Gangly limbs and lofty thoughts
Of life beyond us

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More Haiku For You 

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42 Poems of Matsuo Basho
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More Haiku, Issa for the iPod

This download includes 300 selected poems of Issa (1763-1828), one of the four old-school masters of the Haiku. He wrote more than 5,000 poems, including 16 poems on Sumo wrestling, 5 on Earthworms singing, 9 on snakes entering holes.
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A few dozen Haiku from Basho, Issa, Shiki, Buson - the BIG FOUR of the little poem. It's all about using CONCRETE images to reveal something ephemeral.
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Haiku By Matsuo Basho 

Matsuo Basho (1644-1694) was a Japanese poet and writer during the early Edo period. He took his pen name Basho from his basho-an, a hut made of plantain leaves, to where he would withdraw from society for solitude. He was a master of haiku.

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Haiku By Kobayashi Issa 

One of the four foremost poets of Japanese haiku tradition. Born in the little village of Kashiwabara in the mountains of Japan's Shinano Province on the fifth day of Fifth Month, 1763: June 15 on the Western calendar. He died in the same village on the 19th of Eleventh Month in the old Japanese calendar year that corresponds to 1827: the equivalent of January 5, 1828 on the Western calendar. Though his real name was Kobayashi Yatarô, he chose Issa (Cup-of-Tea) as his haiku name.

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Haiku By Chiyo-Ni 

Chiyo-ni: Woman Haiku Master

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Haiku By Masaoka Shiki 

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Gifts For a Haiku Lover 

Magnetic Poetry - Haiku Kit

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